Question

【題目】 書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題20分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫(xiě)作，請(qǐng)將作文寫(xiě)在答題卡指定的位置上。

根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容，以My Room為題來(lái)介紹你的房間（至少介紹房間五項(xiàng)物品及其位置）。注意行文邏輯清晰，字跡工整。字?jǐn)?shù)要求：50詞左右。

My Room

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Answer 1

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【參考范文】

My Room

This is my room. It’s a nice room. There is a window in the wall, and a desk next to the window. There are some pictures on the wall. Some books and a pencil box are on the desk. I have a big bed and there is a cap on my bed. Where is my schoolbag? Oh, it is on the floor next to my bed. I often clean my room. I like my room very much.

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)要求根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹自己的房間。需要整合信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。首先，要認(rèn)真審題，掌握?qǐng)D片中的信息，需要描述至少五件物品。然后整體把握寫(xiě)作的大致方向，謀篇布局。寫(xiě)作中注意順序，注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】

本文行文流暢，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。文章層次清晰，表述分明，使用了很多句型和短語(yǔ)：＂like…very much, clean the room, next to＂＂I have a big bed and there is a cap on my bed.＂以及活潑的疑問(wèn)句，自問(wèn)自答＂Where is my schoolbag? Oh, it is on the floor next to my bed＂的使用，豐富了文章的內(nèi)容，為文章增色不少。

【解析】略