Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。（滿分10分）

假如你是林濤，想和Julia交筆友。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，給她發(fā)封電子郵件介紹一下自己的情況。

要求：字跡工整、規(guī)范，60詞左右。可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

Name	Lin Tao
Age	13
Look	tall, round face, big nose, big eyes, small mouth
Job	student
School	No.7 Junior High School, Beijing
Favorite animals and food	cats, dogs, rice, chicken

Dear Julia,

My name is Lin Tao. I want to make penfriends with you.

Do you like to be my pen pal?

Yours,

Lin Tao

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Julia,

My name is Lin Tao. I want to make penfriends with you. I’m 13 years old. I’m tall and I have a round face, a big nose, big eyes and a small mouth. I’m a student. I study in No.7 Junior High School, Beijing. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I like animals very much. My favorite animals are dogs and cats. My favorite food is rice and chicken.

Do you like to be my pen pal?

Yours,

Lin Tao

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如I study in No.7 Junior High School, My favorite animals are dogs and cats.等，詞語(yǔ)表達(dá)豐富，文章有邏輯性，富有條理。