Question

11．請(qǐng)以"My favourite school life"為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
要求：1．條理清楚、語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．
2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名．
3．所提供詞匯僅供參考，考生可自由發(fā)揮．
4．詞數(shù)：70詞左右．
參考詞匯：subjects，take part in，school activities，get on well with，meaningful，colorful．
My favourite school life
My school life has changed a lot since this term．We don't need to get to school early．We begin our lessons at eight o'clock．We can get enough sleep．At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day．【高分句型一】After the second class we do morning exercises．After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope．In the afternoon，we can do different kinds of sports．Some play basketball，some play football，others run on the playground．
After school，we don't have too much homework to do．【高分句型二】We have lots of free time．We can do what we like．We can take part in many after-school activities．【具體介紹我最喜歡的學(xué)校生活】
In a word，we are happier and healthier than before．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：At school we have ①at least one hour for sports②to relax ourselves every day．在學(xué)校，我們每天至少要有一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)放松自己．
①at least 固定短語(yǔ)"至少"
②動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)．
高分句型二：After school，we don't have ①too much homework②to do．放學(xué)后，我們沒(méi)有太多的家庭作業(yè)要做．
①too much 修飾不可數(shù)名詞"太多"
②動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語(yǔ)．

解答 My favourite school life
   My school life has changed a lot since this term．We don't need to get to school early．We begin our lessons at eight o'clock．We can get enough sleep．At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day．【高分句型一】After the second class we do morning exercises．After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope．In the afternoon，we can do different kinds of sports．Some play basketball，some play football，others run on the playground．
After school，we don't have too much homework to do．【高分句型二】We have lots of free time．We can do what we like．We can take part in many after-school activities．【具體介紹我最喜歡的學(xué)校生活】
In a word，we are happier  and healthier than before．【總結(jié)全文】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文．寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵是要抓住文章的中心內(nèi)容來(lái)寫(xiě)，把學(xué)生睡眠不足的原因?qū)懬宄�并提出建議．寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要先確定好時(shí)態(tài)，再注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語(yǔ)，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．避免出現(xiàn)一些詞匯及語(yǔ)法上的錯(cuò)誤．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)．