Question

明天（星期五）全班同學(xué)將去參觀科學(xué)博物館(the Science Museum)，由你（班長(zhǎng)）通知全體同學(xué)。（通知的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出）內(nèi)容如下：
1.早上8點(diǎn)鐘在校門口集合，步行前往。 2．下星期一交一份有關(guān)參觀的報(bào)告。 3．參觀時(shí)要認(rèn)真聽(tīng)，仔細(xì)看并記下有趣的東西。4．不可在博物館內(nèi)大聲喧嘩及拍照。 5．帶筆和筆記本。詞數(shù)80左右。
參考詞匯：上交hand in， 認(rèn)真聽(tīng)listen carefully， 記下write down，
喧嘩make noise， 拍照take pictures， 帶上take…with you
Boys and girls,
We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow.________________________
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Thank you

Answer 1

One possible version：
Boys and girls,
We are going to visit the Science Museum tomorrow. We will meet at 8 o’clock at the school gate and we will walk there. Don’t forget to take your pen and notebook with you because you have to use them to write down something interesting while visiting. So you had better listen as carefully as you can. A report about the trip must be handed in next Monday. Finally, it’s not allowed to make noise or take photos. Wish a nice trip.
Thank you.

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)根據(jù)提綱內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)信息，運(yùn)用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和特定的句型表達(dá)注意點(diǎn)。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。文章銜接連貫，運(yùn)用了so, because，finally等連詞進(jìn)行銜接。同時(shí)，本文中運(yùn)用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:had better do, It’s not allowed to do等。