Question

合肥某學(xué)校九年級(jí)(3)班舉行了“讀好書,促成長”的主題班會(huì)。會(huì)上同學(xué)們積極發(fā)言,請根據(jù)發(fā)言內(nèi)容寫一份倡議書,倡議全班同學(xué)認(rèn)真讀書,豐富自己的課余生活。

讀書的重要性	讀書可以獲取知識(shí),增長見識(shí),使人聰明,使人快樂,有助于學(xué)習(xí),有助于成長。
班級(jí)讀書情況	許多同學(xué)在上網(wǎng)、看電視、聽音樂上花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間,讀書時(shí)間太少。
發(fā)出倡議	多讀書,讀好書。

參考詞匯：獲取知識(shí)gain knowledge;增長見識(shí)open the mind
My dear friends,
Reading plays an important part in our daily life.
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Let’s start reading now。

Answer 1

My dear friends,
Reading plays an important part in our daily life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person.
However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as surfing the Internet, listening to music, and watching TV and so on take up too much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should spend more time in reading books and reading good books. It will do good to us. Let’s start reading now.

試題分析：這是一篇給定材料作文，要求圍繞“讀好書,促成長”的主題寫一份倡議書,倡議全班同學(xué)認(rèn)真讀書,豐富自己的課余生活。.本題給出了具體要點(diǎn)：讀書的重要些，班級(jí)讀書情況，發(fā)出倡議。在動(dòng)筆寫作.選取材料時(shí),注意選擇自己熟悉的內(nèi)容.在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱以第一人稱為主，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。在寫書面表達(dá)是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意英語的動(dòng)詞，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動(dòng)詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】該文使用了not only…but also等連接詞，多處使用主從復(fù)合句，為文章增色不少。