Question

假設(shè)你喜歡的老師是Mr. Wang 或者M(jìn)s. Wang.請根據(jù)下面的提示，以My favorite teacher 為題目，用英語寫一篇短文。
要求：1. 必須包括①description ②friendship ③the best quality 三個方面的內(nèi)容，括號內(nèi)的提示可以任意選擇或可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名或?qū)W校。
3．字?jǐn)?shù)（80-100）（文章題目和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總次數(shù)）
①description (appearance, character…)
favorite teacher    ②friendship  (an event between you; the story of becoming friends)
③the best quality （kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful…）
My favorite teacher
My favorite teacher is                                                            
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Answer 1

參考答案：
My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36- year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.  

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己老師的短文。本題給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，注意從三個方面進(jìn)行描寫。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，需要注意人稱和謂語動詞的搭配問題，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問題比較少。注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達(dá)時，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤。日常學(xué)習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，熟記一些經(jīng)典句型，考試時就能有所參照，有的放矢。