Question

【題目】假如你是李華，于4月13日星期五這一天參加了學(xué)校組織的郊游活動(dòng).請(qǐng)你以 school trip 為主題，寫一則英文日記，內(nèi)容包括參加活動(dòng)的人員、集合時(shí)間、郊游地點(diǎn)、交通方式、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及個(gè)人感受等.

要求:(1)80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；

(2)可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

(3)日記中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名.

Friday， April 13th

It was sunny today.We went on a school trip.

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Answer 1

【答案】It was sunmy today. We went on a school trip. We visited the Greenery Farm and it was great fun.All of our classmates met at the school gate at 7: 00 a.m， and went to the farm by bus. On arriving there， we were given a warm welcome by the farm workers. Then one of the workers showed us around the farm， where we learned a lot about farming.

At noon， we had a picnic， during which we enjoyed ourselves in the sunshine， singing， dancing and flying the kites. We did love the fresh air and the beauty of nature. We took lots of pictures. Time flied! It was time for us to leave though we didn’t want to. It was really an unforgettable and meaningful trip for us.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份寫一篇日記，記敘自己在4月13日，星期五這一天參加學(xué)校組織的郊游活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括參加活動(dòng)的人員、集合時(shí)間、郊游地點(diǎn)、交通方式、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及個(gè)人感受等。題目中并未規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，因此學(xué)生們應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的主觀能動(dòng)性和想象力，充分調(diào)動(dòng)自己所學(xué)的語言知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備，根據(jù)提示歸納出寫作要點(diǎn)，自主確定寫作內(nèi)容，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，這是寫作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。另外，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，因此不能根據(jù)漢語的思維寫漢語式的句子，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木涫剑�并用完整的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。正確使用be動(dòng)詞、實(shí)意動(dòng)詞、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)以及形容詞和副詞等，可以用簡單句為主，使文章簡潔、明了。穿插使用較長、較復(fù)雜的句子，提升文章檔次。還應(yīng)注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，增強(qiáng)文章的連貫性。