Question

你如何看待動物？哪些動物是瀕危動物？你認為如何保護瀕危動物？結(jié)合所學(xué)知識闡述一下你的觀點，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

Answer 1

I think animals are our friends, and we must let them live in peace. We shouldn’t kill them for meat or other things. Many animals, such as pandas, tigers, blue whales and elephants, are in danger now. We should try our best to protect them. We should make our environment clean and tidy. We shouldn’t make the water dirty. We must make nature reserves bigger. So animals will have enough place to live in and enough food to eat. Let’s do something right away, or it will be too late.

解析試題分析：試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點中給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題，本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),復(fù)數(shù)第一人稱,注意情態(tài)動詞should的應(yīng)用。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。另外，在描述時，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。
考點：命題作文的寫作
點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。