Question

10．初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)即將結(jié)束，回顧過去三年的成長過程，你一定有很多感想．請以"Think Back to my School Life"為題寫一篇80字左右的短文，從學(xué)習(xí)、生活、愛好等方面作出自我評價．
提示詞語：three years，learn，knowledge，friends，happy，hobby．
溫謦提示：（1）短文要求語句通順、意思連貫、語法正確、書寫規(guī)范．
（2）短文中請勿使用真實姓名、地點或所在班級，否則將被扣分．
Think Back to my School Life
I have studied in my middle school for three years．With the help of my teachers and my classmates，I have learnt a lot．I have learnt not only knowledge but also how to make friends．I improve my grade greatly．Of all my subjects，I do best in English and Chinese．But my math is a little weak．I think I will try my best to learn it well．At the same time，I live a happy school life．I have a lot of hobbies．I like sports．I often play basketball，football and volleyball with my friends after school．Football is my favorite．I hope I can study in No.1 Middle School．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I think I will try my best to learn it well．我認(rèn)為我要盡我最大的努力學(xué)好它．句子中I think后面跟的是一個賓語從句；try one's best to do sth盡力做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的動詞不定式形式．
②I have studied in my middle school for three years．我在學(xué)校已經(jīng)學(xué)習(xí)了三年了．for three years三年，是由for引導(dǎo)的一段時間，通常用于現(xiàn)在完成時之中，現(xiàn)在完成時的構(gòu)成是have/has+動詞的過去分詞．

解答 Think Back to my School Life
 I have studied in my middle school for three years（高分句型）（引出話題）．With the help of my teachers and my classmates，I have learnt a lot．I have learnt not only knowledge but also how to make friends．I improve my grade greatly．Of all my subjects，I do best in English and Chinese．But my math is a little weak．I think I will try my best to learn it well（高分句型）（學(xué)習(xí)方面的評價）．At the same time，I live a happy school life．I have a lot of hobbies．I like sports．I often play basketball，football and volleyball with my friends after school．Football is my favorite（我的愛好）．I hope I can study in No.1 Middle School（我的希望）．

點評 本篇是一個小作文，寫作時根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的 句子，劃分必要的段落．但要注意句式的靈活運用，長、短句，簡單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運用．