Question

如今，業(yè)余時(shí)間開(kāi)展做自愿者活動(dòng)已近越來(lái)越流行�！拔逡弧奔磳�來(lái)臨，最近班級(jí)中展開(kāi)Volunteer活動(dòng)大討論，根據(jù)下列表格中例舉的內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇不少于100詞的英語(yǔ)文章。

Name	What to do?	Reasons
Jack	Go to the Children’s Hospital	Be good with kids ---- ; learn how to ---.
Tom	Go to an animal hospital	To be an animal doctor; learn ----
Helen	Go to an old people’s home	Be good at singing and dancing ----
Me	-------(不同于以上三點(diǎn))

These days, volunteering is getting more and more popular, and more and more people volunteer their free time to help other. ____________________________

Answer 1

These days, volunteering is getting more and more popular, and more and more people volunteer their free time to help other. Jack wants to go to the Children’s Hospital. He is good with kids. He wants to cheer them up and learn how to get along with others. Tom wants to go to an animal hospital. He wants to be an animal doctor. He wants to learn more about how to care for animals. Helen wants to go to an old people’s home because she is good at singing and dancing. She wants to learn how to sing well. I decide to try out for a volunteer after school reading program. I am a book lover. I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time. We will be happy.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯；用詞準(zhǔn)確、句子通順、行文連貫、表達(dá)清楚，沒(méi)有或基本沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。