Question

上周日下午在市中心發(fā)生了一起搶劫案件，一位中年男子不懼歹徒，與歹徒展開了搏斗。請根據(jù)下圖所描述的事情經(jīng)過，結(jié)合你的感受，為揚子晚報寫一篇題為“What A Brave Man”的英文稿件。

注意：
1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 
2．語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范； 
3．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
What A Brave Man
There are many brave people in the world who are willing to help others no matter what happens.
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

There are many brave people in the world who are willing to help others no matter what happens. Last Sunday afternoon, an old granny was selling newspapers at the bus stop in the centre of the city. Suddenly, a strong man ran past her and robbed her of her money. It happened so quickly that the old granny could do nothing but cried sadly. Just at that time, a middle-aged man came from behind. He rushed to the robber and put up a good fight with him. At last, he caught the robber successfully.
How brave and helpful the man is! If we all give a hand to people in need, the world will be much better.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文。根據(jù)圖片可知是介紹一個勇敢的人不懼歹徒，與歹徒展開了搏斗的事跡。用過去時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】這篇短文時態(tài)運用正確，能條理流暢的記述事情的發(fā)展，豐富的句式變化如It happened so quickly that the old granny….，Just at that time，At last，How brave and helpful the man is!可見作者的英語功底非常扎實。