Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是劉云, 現(xiàn)在的你和兩年前相比, 有很大變化。對(duì)于將來, 你有很多憧憬, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表寫一篇短文。

	Two years ago	Now	In thirteen years
身份	a primary school student	a Grade 8 student	a doctor
外貌	矮，短發(fā)	高了些，頭發(fā)和以前一樣短	高得多
個(gè)性	害羞，朋友少	更外向，朋友更多	自信confident，友好
愛好	彈鋼琴	每周打兩次乒乓球	\
理想	鋼琴家	長(zhǎng)大后當(dāng)醫(yī)生	\

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

I'm Liu Yun. Two years ago, I was a primary school student. I was short with short hair. I was shy and had few friends. At that time, I liked playing the piano and I wanted to be a pianist.

Now I'm a student in Grade 8. I'm taller, but my hair is as short as before. I'm more outgoing and I have more friends. I play ping-pong twice a week with my friends.

I want to be a doctor when I grow up. I will be much taller. I will be confident and friendly to everybody. I hope my dream will come true.

【解析】

1. 題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求對(duì)兩年前和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行比較，并且描述對(duì)未來的憧憬。注意時(shí)態(tài)，不同時(shí)間選擇時(shí)態(tài)不同。兩年前和現(xiàn)在對(duì)比要應(yīng)用形容詞或副詞的比較級(jí)。注意上下文銜接，使文章連貫，通順。