Question

如今社會上越來越多的人喜歡飼養(yǎng)寵物，有些人甚至把養(yǎng)的寵物視為家庭的一名成員。而養(yǎng)寵物也引發(fā)了一系列的社會問題，如：咬傷小孩、隨地大小便、污染環(huán)境等。那么，同學們是怎樣看待飼養(yǎng)寵物這一現(xiàn)象的呢？請根據(jù)以下提示以“Pets”為題寫一篇80個詞左右的短文，談談自己的看法和觀點。（首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
提示：1. 寵物是人們的好朋友，能給人帶來快樂和溫暖；
2.寵物能幫助人做各種事情;
3.養(yǎng)寵物浪費時間和金錢；
4.寵物傳播疾病，污染環(huán)境，危害我們的健康。
Pets
Recently, more and more people like to keep pets.

Answer 1

Recently, more and more people like to keep pets. Some of them even regard their pets as one of their family members. They say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness . I also like pets. Pets are our good friends. But I don’t think it’s good for people to keep so many animals as pets. Why? Because too many pets may cause a lot of problems. For example, if there are more pets on the streets, it’s easy for people to get some diseases from them. Sometimes , some pets are dangerous to people. What’s more, keeping pets may cost people lots of time and money. 

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的內(nèi)容。提示給出了兩方面的材料------養(yǎng)寵物的優(yōu)點和養(yǎng)寵物的缺點。材料給的是當下的普遍社會現(xiàn)象，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)即可。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須談及自己的看法和觀點。
【亮點說明】本文內(nèi)容充實，包含了所給的所有提示，并按要求談到自己的觀點。文章運用了一定的復合句和重點句型，顯示了作者的基本功，如：They say that pets can help them do some useful things and bring them joy and happiness。But I don’t think it’s good for people to keep so many animals as pets。it’s easy for people to get some diseases from them。另外，運用了Why，F(xiàn)or example，What’s more等插入語使得文章銜接緊湊，過度自然。