Question

好學(xué)生的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是什么？考試成績的高低是唯一的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)嗎？大家都來說說看！請先回答下列調(diào)查表中的問題（劃√），然后以 “What is a good student?” 為題，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己的觀點。

Are you a good student?
Questions	Yes	No
1. Do you often get high marks?	(   )	(   )
2. Are you hard-working?	(   )	(   )
3. Do you like reading?	(   )	(   )
4. Are you helpful to others?	(   )	(   )
5. Can you get on well with your classmates?	(   )	(   )
6. Do you have anything you are good at?	(   )	(   )

要求：1、文中不能出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實信息；
2、詞數(shù)80左右。

Answer 1

What is a good student?
Many students want to be good students, what is a good student? Here are my opinions. First, a good student can not often get high marks. However, as a good student, you must be hard-working and like reading. I think a good student should be knowledgeable and regard study as interest. What’s more, a good student should be helpful to others. So that you can get on well with your classmates.  In general, a good student not only gets good grades, but also has his friends. Are you a good student?

試題分析：本題要求先回答調(diào)查表中的問題（劃√），然后以 “What is a good student?” 為題，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)自己的觀點。在寫作時，要注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰，不要漏掉信息點。主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。寫作時注意句子的完整性，主謂一致�？梢允褂靡恍┻B詞，使文章更緊湊，結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰。
【亮點說明】這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了，如使詞語first，however，what’s more等使文章更具條理性。文中也用到了not only···but also等句型，意思表達(dá)清晰完整