Question

初中畢業(yè)在即，相信同學(xué)們在英語學(xué)習(xí)的過程中都會有不同的經(jīng)歷和感受。某英語學(xué)習(xí)報“特別關(guān)注”欄目本期開設(shè)的話題是“It is … to learn English”。請你用英語寫一篇短文，為該欄目投稿。

   要求：

  （1）將題目補充完整;              （2）中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范;

  （3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名;（4）詞數(shù)80詞左右。

It is            to learn English

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

I didn’t like English before, because I didn’t thought it was useful if I didn’t go abroad. But a thing changed my opinion.

         One day, my uncle bought a DVD player and he didn’t know how to use it, so he asked me for help. When I turned on the player, I found the language was English. I tried my best to follow the instructions with the help of a dictionary, and at last I knew the way of using it. I told my uncle how to use it and he praised me much. I felt very proud.

         Ever since I have thought English is very useful in our everyday life. So I decide to learn it well.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇學(xué)習(xí)體會，給出一定的漢語提示。給考生發(fā)揮的余地 較大。對于考生的綜合能力較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的的能力和組織要點的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在自己能力范圍內(nèi)，選擇句式要賦予變化，這樣才能證明你能更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個整體。最后要注意使用高級詞匯與高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。因為是海報，故時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時較好，注意人稱的轉(zhuǎn)換。

【亮點說明】本文用了很常見的短語如go abroad 出國  asked sb for help向某人求助  turn on 打開  try one’s best to  努力做某事 with the help of 在某人幫助下。I told my uncle how to use it and he praised me much這個句子中and連接兩個句子，并且時態(tài)保持一致。Ever since I have thought English is very useful in our everyday life此句話中用了現(xiàn)在完成時，并且有明顯的時間狀語Ever since。這篇范文中還出現(xiàn)比較高級詞匯如change  instructions praise為文章增色不少。

考點：提綱類作文。