Question

每一個(gè)人都有朋友，朋友似陽(yáng)光陪伴并溫暖著我們。假如Liu Ming 是你的朋友，請(qǐng)按要求寫(xiě)一篇不少于100詞的英語(yǔ)文章，內(nèi)容包括：
1、你和Liu Ming 的比照；
2、對(duì)于朋友是同還是異更好表達(dá)你的看法；
3、和朋友友好相處的建議；（不少于2點(diǎn)）
提示：
1、Liu Ming：15 ，serious；like reading books; be good at schoolwork; dream: to be a doctor.---
2、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息；
3、表達(dá)完整，邏輯順暢

Answer 1

LiuMing is one of my good friends.He is 15 years old and he is very serious.I’m as old as him and I’m outgoing.He likes reading books, but I like playing computer games.He is good at schoolwork.His dream is to be a doctor,but I want to be a teacher when I grow up.
I like friends who are different.As we are different.,we have different interests ,we can learn more from each other .As good friends,We should get along well with each other and help each other.We should be honest .And I think if you want to have a good friend ,you should respect your friend and share your interests with each other.Do you think so?

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: likes reading books, 喜歡讀書(shū) is good at schoolwork擅長(zhǎng)學(xué)業(yè)I like friends who are different.我喜歡性格相異的朋友。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.