Question

下面是大明寫(xiě)給他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的煩惱。請(qǐng)你以他的朋友Tom的身份，給他寫(xiě)一封80詞左右的回信，在信中指出他的問(wèn)題并給他提出建議。信的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?

Yours,

Daming

Dear Daming,

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Yours,

Tom

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Daming,

I know your problem. You’ve made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate’s pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn’t tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.

Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. She will realize that you’re truly sorry.

I hope the advice can help you. I’m sure you will make up with her soon.

Yours,

Tom

【解析】提出Tom的錯(cuò)誤，并提出意見(jiàn)。錯(cuò)誤一定要清楚，建議要實(shí)用。時(shí)態(tài)涉及一版現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

考點(diǎn)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。文章邏輯清楚 first, second... 重要語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)

tell sb. the truth,s be angry with sb., make up with sb.