Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

下圖描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。請根據(jù)圖片提示，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文。

要求：1. 完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況陳述個人觀點(diǎn)或給出建議。

Answer 1

【答案】Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao seaside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people don't pay attention to hygiene. There's rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. We should avoid the rush hour and choose some unknown places.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)圖片的內(nèi)容介紹一下李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday）外出旅游的經(jīng)歷。主要是要完整敘述圖片內(nèi)容、結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況陳述個人觀點(diǎn)或給出建議。時態(tài)為一般過去時，人稱為第三人稱。在陳述個人觀點(diǎn)或給出建議時用一般現(xiàn)在時來寫。注意作文中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. 你在海邊看到的不是風(fēng)景，而是無數(shù)晃動的頭。句子What you see at the seaside做主語。

【高分句型二】

In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not throw rubbish everywhere. 在我看來，旅行時，人們不僅要注意安全，還要注意衛(wèi)生，不要到處亂扔垃圾。該句話運(yùn)用了not only…but also…。