Question

1．一張照片，一個故事，一段美好的時光．請你用英語寫一篇不少于80 詞的短文和大家一起分享照片背后的故事．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．拍照的時間、地點；
2．照片中的人物和情景；
3．照片背后的故事和你的感受．
I have a lot of photos．Whenever Ilook at these pictures，Iwill think of the days that have passed．One of the most important photos wastaken nearly8 years ago，when I was only 6years old．
This picture was taken in front of my grandparents'old house．There is a tall tree near the house．The house looks old but clean，very small but lovely．In this picture，my grandparents are sitting in the middle．My father and mother are standing behind them．Iam sitting on my grandma's laps．There is a big smile on our faces．
The old house was pulled down a few years ago．Many new buildings and roads have been built up since then．And we have moved into a new apartment．Ihave grown up，but Istill remember the old days．Imiss the old house，the kind neighbors and the kids that Iplayed with in the yard．Thepicture always reminds me of the happy days in the old house．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是大家一起分享照片背后的故事．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時、現(xiàn)在完成時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．拍照的時間、地點；
2．照片中的人物和情景；
3．照片背后的故事和你的感受．
常用到的重點短語：
think of 想起
in front of 在…前面
there be 有
pull down 推倒
remind sb of 讓某人想起
【高分句型】
1．①One of the most important photos ②was taken nearly 8 years ago，③when I was only 6 years old．
①one of+the+最高級+名詞復(fù)數(shù) 最怎么樣的…之一
②一般過去時的被動語態(tài)was/were+過去分詞．
③when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
2．I miss the old house，the kind neighbors and the kids that I played with in the yard．
that I played with 是定語從句，先行詞是the kids，關(guān)系詞that做從句的賓語．

解答 I have a lot of photos．Whenever I look at these pictures，I will think of the days that have passed．One of the most important photos was taken nearly 8 years ago，when I was only 6 years old．【高分句型】（拍照的時間）This picture was taken in front of my grandparents'old house．（拍照地點）There is a tall tree near the house．The house looks old but clean，very small but lovely．In this picture，my grandparents are sitting in the middle．My father and mother are standing behind them．I am sitting on my grandma's laps．There is a big smile on our faces．（照片中的人物和情景）
The old house was pulled down a few years ago．Many new buildings and roads have been built up since then．And we have moved into a new apartment．I have grown up，but I still remember the old days．I miss the old house，the kind neighbors and the kids that I played with in the yard．【高分句型】The picture always reminds me of the happy days in the old house．（照片背后的故事和你的感受）

點評 提綱作文是一項能夠充分考查學(xué)生語言綜合運用能力的題型．主要考查學(xué)生運用已學(xué)的語言基礎(chǔ)知識和已掌握的英語寫作技能準確表達客觀事實，闡述個人觀點，進行思想交流的書面表達能力．為了提高書面表達水平，平時應(yīng)加強閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文．此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識，掌握常用文體的寫作方法．其實，用英文寫信，記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫作的好方法．