Question

11．假設(shè)你是Li Ming，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)筆友Tom 寫(xiě)一封 e-mail，介紹你的英語(yǔ)老師Mr．Lee．要點(diǎn)如下：
（1）他40歲，有一個(gè)幸福的家；
（2）性格外向，與學(xué)生相處很好；
（3）他的課堂很有趣，課后常幫我們學(xué)英語(yǔ)；
（4）不抽煙，非常喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，擅長(zhǎng)下棋；
（5）寫(xiě)一至兩點(diǎn)其他同學(xué)對(duì)他的看法．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)60-80，信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（2）文中不要提及真實(shí)的校名和人名．
參考詞匯：outgoing adj．外向的
smoke v．吸煙
chess n．棋．Dear Tom，
How are you recently？Now I'll tell you something about my English teacher Mr．Lee．
Mr．Lee is forty years old．He has a happy family．He's outgoing and gets along well with us．His classes are very interesting．After class，he often helps us with our English．He never smokes．He likes sports．He is especially good at playing chess．
Most of my classmates like him and think that he's not only a good teacher but also a good friend．
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容給筆友介紹自己的英語(yǔ)老師Mr．Lee．注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)主要為第一人稱(chēng)．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
（1）他40歲，有一個(gè)幸福的家；
（2）性格外向，與學(xué)生相處很好；
（3）他的課堂很有趣，課后常幫我們學(xué)英語(yǔ)；
（4）不抽煙，非常喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，擅長(zhǎng)下棋；
（5）寫(xiě)一至兩點(diǎn)其他同學(xué)對(duì)他的看法．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
Outgoing 外向的、性格開(kāi)朗的 get along well with sb 與某人相處融洽   help sb with sth 幫助某人做某事  be good at doing sth 擅長(zhǎng)做某事   not only…but also 不但…而且…look forward to doing sth 盼望做某事
高分句型：
1．He's  so outgoing that he gets along well with us．
so…that表示如此…以至于，that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，中間加上形容詞或副詞原級(jí)，這里是副詞so修飾形容詞outgoing；包含一個(gè)重要短語(yǔ)get along well with sb與某人相處融洽．
2．Most of my classmates like him and think ①that he's②not only a good teacher but also a good friend．
①that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，作為think的賓語(yǔ)．
②not only…but also…不僅…而且…，連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分，這里是連接兩個(gè)主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)遵循就近原則．

解答 Dear Tom，
How are you recently？Now I'll tell you something about my English teacher Mr．Lee．（引出下文）
Mr．Lee is forty years old．He has a happy family．（年齡，家庭）He's  so outgoing that he gets along well with us．（高分句型）（性格及與學(xué)生相處融洽）His classes are very interesting．（課堂）After class，he often helps us with our English．（課下）He never smokes．（不吸煙） He likes sports．He is especially good at playing chess．（喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)擅長(zhǎng)下棋）
Most of my classmates like him and think that he's not only a good teacher but also a good friend．（高分句型）（同學(xué)的看法）
I'm looking forward to your reply．（表達(dá)愿望）
Yours，
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇所給材料比較詳細(xì)的提綱作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系