Question

假如今天是星期五，英語(yǔ)老師讓你用英語(yǔ)談一下本星期日打算做的事情。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列中文提示，以為題目寫(xiě)一篇約60詞左后的英語(yǔ)短文。短文內(nèi)容包括下列內(nèi)容：
早上6：30起床，早飯后與弟弟騎自行車去人民公園游玩。
游泳、滑冰、爬山等等，拍一些照片。
午飯?jiān)诠珗@吃。
大約下午3:00回家，稍作休息后看足球賽。
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Answer 1

 
It’s Friday today. I am going to do some things on Sunday. I will get up at 6:30. After breakfast, I will go to the People’ Park with my brother by bike. We will not only go swimming, go skating and climb mountains but also take some pictures. We will have lunch in the park. At about 3:00 pm,we will return home. After taking a rest for a moment, we will watch football game on TV.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫(xiě)自己的個(gè)人情況，包括所在學(xué)校、星座、性格、愛(ài)好，然后寫(xiě)自己的煩惱，最后請(qǐng)求幫助。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如get up,After breakfast,by bikenot only... but also,go swimming,go skating,climb mountains, take some pictures,have lunch,take a rest,for a moment,on TV 等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)After taking a rest for a moment,。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。