Question

9．假如你是李鋒，你的同桌黃明不喜歡英語(yǔ)，上課不認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，不能完成作業(yè)．請(qǐng)你給他提一些認(rèn)真學(xué)英語(yǔ)的建議．
要求：1．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不少于80詞．
2．意思清楚，語(yǔ)句連貫．
Dear Huang Ming，
How are you？You're a clever boy，but you don't like English．You often don't listen to the teacher carefully and don't finish your homework．I think it's bad．English is very important to us．If we learn English badly，we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job．So we must learn it well．We should listen to the teacher carefully and finish our homework on time．We should also listento tapes and write down notes every day．
Let's work hard at English from now on．I'm sure you can learn it well．
Yours，
Li Feng．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇書信格式的作文，建議別人怎么學(xué)好英語(yǔ)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．寫作要點(diǎn)為：（1）分析李鋒英語(yǔ)不好的原因；（2）學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的重要性；（3）學(xué)英語(yǔ)的建議．
重點(diǎn)詞匯和短語(yǔ)：
listen to the teacher carefully    認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講
be able to do sth   有能力做某事
on time  按時(shí)
write down notes  記筆記
from now on  從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始
高分句型：
（1）If we learn English badly，we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job．如果我們英語(yǔ)學(xué)得不好，我們就不能上大學(xué)，找不到一個(gè)好工作．這里"If we learn English badly"為if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，"we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job"為主句，條件句表可能，主句多用將來(lái)時(shí)，即主將從現(xiàn)．or為或者，連接兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，表選擇．（2）I'm sure you can learn it well．我相信你會(huì)學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的．"you can learn it well"為be sure 引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．（3）Let's work hard at English from now on．讓我們從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始好好學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)．這是一個(gè)let引導(dǎo)的祈使句，用在此處表示建議．

解答 Dear Huang Ming，
How are you？You're a clever boy，but you don't like English．You often don't listen to the teacher carefully and don't finish your homework．（英語(yǔ)不好的原因） I think it's bad．English is very important to us． If we learn English badly，we'll not be able to go to college or find a good job．（高分句型）So we must learn it well．（學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的重要性） We should listen to the teacher carefully and finish our homework on time．We should also listen to tapes and write down notes every day．（學(xué)英語(yǔ)的建議）
Let's work hard at English from now on． （高分句型）I'm sure you can learn it well．（高分句型）
yours
Li Feng

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇書信作文，要注意格式問(wèn)題．要注意邏輯問(wèn)題，層次分明．先分析原因，然后介紹學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的重要性，最后提出建議，層層遞進(jìn)．最后檢查一遍，避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤．