Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。
課余時(shí)間是我們忙碌學(xué)習(xí)生活的調(diào)節(jié)劑。你是如何支配自己的閑暇時(shí)間呢？看電視、做運(yùn)動(dòng)、聽(tīng)音樂(lè)、閱讀書(shū)報(bào)、效游、幫父母做家務(wù)？還是……
請(qǐng)你以“My Free Time”為題，描述一個(gè)自己的課余生活。
注意：1、要求條理清楚，字跡工整；80個(gè)詞左右。
2、開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，請(qǐng)你接著往下寫(xiě)。
My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my spare time.                                                
                                                                  
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                            
                                                                                              
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                                                                             
                                              

Answer 1

My Free Time
I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school. I like basketball and volleyball very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while. I find it a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking. Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends. We always have a good time!

解析試題分析；這是一篇命題作文，介紹自己的課余生活。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一人稱，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意運(yùn)用所給短語(yǔ)。敘述順序基本按照時(shí)間順序敘述即可，注意上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。文中適當(dāng)使用代詞，注意避免句式的單調(diào)重復(fù)，避免單詞及語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
考點(diǎn)：命題作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作文考查的是學(xué)生基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作能力，主要是一些基礎(chǔ)句型的應(yīng)用。平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)注意對(duì)于一些常見(jiàn)句型句式的記憶，聯(lián)系默寫(xiě)此類句型。對(duì)于一些比較經(jīng)典的段落，有目的的進(jìn)行背誦，考試作為參照。這尤其對(duì)于敘述的邏輯問(wèn)題有很大的幫助。