Question

研究表明音樂對人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂來調(diào)節(jié)心情。請根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容，寫一篇英語短文。

 

聽音樂前的情緒狀態(tài)	適用音樂	聽音樂后的心境
壓力大，過分焦慮	流行音樂	放松
沉迷電腦游戲，興奮過度	鄉(xiāng)村音樂	平靜
困倦.疲勞	搖滾音樂	振奮
孤獨(dú).悲傷	（考生自擬）	（考生自擬）

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)；

3.條理清楚.語句連續(xù)；

4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名.校名和人名等信息。

（參考詞匯：搖滾音樂rock music）

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

     Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So people use different kinds of music to change moods. If you feel stressed and worry a lot, you can listen to pop music. After you listen to it, you will feel relaxed. Some of the students are crazy about computer games and feel over excited, they can listen to country music. After listening to it, they will feel calm and peaceful. Some people feel tired and sleepy, they can listen to rock music. After they listen to it, they will feel excited. Sometimes I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to disco music, after I listen to it, I feel happy again. Music is so wonderful. I like it very much.

【解析】本題要求寫一篇音樂的議論文。本題所給材料較為詳細(xì)，故動筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容。寫作中主要將各種情緒狀態(tài)及適合的音樂介紹清楚。結(jié)合語境可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，人稱問題較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。