Question

1．人生，就像如圖所示的漫畫(huà)，充滿喜怒哀樂(lè)，時(shí)而恐慌，時(shí)而陷入沉思．請(qǐng)你以I like to be_____為題，寫(xiě)篇短文，敘述與上面漫畫(huà)表情有關(guān)的一段故事或經(jīng)歷（詞數(shù)80～100）．步驟與要點(diǎn)如下．
1．確定主題，并在文中說(shuō)明原因；
2．圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述；
3．講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷．
要求：
1．補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題（可選擇A節(jié)方框中的詞匯，也可選用其他詞匯） （精校）；
2．字跡工整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范；
3．鼓勵(lì)寫(xiě)出真情實(shí)感，對(duì)緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分；
4．文中不要出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)校名和姓名．
I like to behappy
Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings I'd like to be happy becausehappiness plays an important part in the world．It can make us do some things better．It can also make us confident．So I would like to be happy．
One day，there was an exam．It was very important．So many students were afraid to face it．They felt very nervous．And they were afraid to fail the exam．But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself．And I reviewed the lessons carefully．In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks．

I have learned about the importance of happiness．So let's be happy together．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以I like to be_____為題敘述與上面漫畫(huà)表情有關(guān)的一段故事或經(jīng)歷．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．確定主題，并在文中說(shuō)明原因；
2．圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述；
3．講述一段與主題有關(guān)的故事或經(jīng)歷．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
play a part扮演一個(gè)角色
make sb do sth讓某人做某事
make sb+adj讓某人怎么樣
be afraid to do sth害怕做某事
as well as 也
【高分句型】
1．I'd like to be happy ①because happiness②plays an important part in the world．
①because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
②play an important part  扮演一個(gè)重要角色．
2．①I(mǎi)n the end I passed the exam successfully②as well as got high marks．
①in the end最后，最終．
②as well as 也，連接兩個(gè)并列的同等成分．

解答 I like to be happy
      Life is a colorful picture full of different feelings．I'd like to be happy（確定主題） because happiness plays an important part in the world．【高分句型】（說(shuō)明原因）It can make us do some things better．It can also make us confident．So I would like to be happy．（進(jìn)行敘述） 
         One day，there was an exam．It was very important．So many students were afraid to face it．They felt very nervous．And they were afraid to fail the exam．But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself．And I reviewed the lessons carefully．In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks．【高分句型】（一段有關(guān)經(jīng)歷）
         I have learned about the importance of happiness．So let's be happy together

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無(wú)把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣