Question

5．某中學(xué)網(wǎng)站提出"走路去上學(xué)"的倡議，請(qǐng)你就這一話題寫(xiě)一篇約80-100詞的英語(yǔ)短文．
內(nèi)容提示：
1．走路有利于健康安全；
2．和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以互相了解，相互幫助；
3．不需要父母接送，學(xué)會(huì)自理；
4．道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
5．有利于保護(hù)環(huán)境；
要求：
1要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范．
2文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名，否則不予評(píng)分．
3開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
參考詞匯：
be good for  有利于，each other 互相，no longer不再，crowded 擁堵
Walking to school
I think walking to school is good for us．First of all，walking to school is a wonderful way toexercise and it's good for health．Next，it's fun to walk together withfriends every day．We can talkabout somethinginteresting and know each other better．What's more，if we walk，our parentswon't have to drive us to school．We can learn to look after ourselves．There will be fewer cars in the city．Morewalking and less driving helps tomake our city cleaner．The streets won't be as crowded as they are now．Walking to school helps usprotect the environment as well．I hope more and morestudents will walk to school．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容說(shuō)說(shuō)走路去上學(xué)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．走路有利于健康安全；
2．和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以互相了解，相互幫助；
3．不需要父母接送，學(xué)會(huì)自理；
4．道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵；
5．有利于保護(hù)環(huán)境
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be good for  有利于
each other 互相
what's more再者
as…as與…一樣…
比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來(lái)越…
【高分句型】
1．①First of all，②walking to school is a wonderful way ③to exercise and ④it's good for health．
①first of all首先．
②動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
③動(dòng)詞不定式做后置定語(yǔ)修飾way．
④be good for  有利于
2．①What's more，②if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school．
①what's more再者
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 Walking to school
    I think walking to school is good for us．First of all，walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it's good for health．（走路有利于健康安全）【高分句型】Next，it's fun to walk together with friends every day．We can talk about something interesting and know each other better．（和同學(xué)結(jié)伴可以互相了解，相互幫助）What's more，if we walk，our parents won't have to drive us to school．【高分句型】We can learn to look after ourselves．（不需要父母接送，學(xué)會(huì)自理）There will be fewer cars in the city．More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner．The streets won't be as crowded as they are now．（道路上車輛減少，城市不再擁堵）Walking to school helps us protect the environment as well．（有利于保護(hù)環(huán)境）I hope more and more students will walk to school．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫(xiě)作對(duì)象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領(lǐng)悟，考生在審題上一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示運(yùn)用相關(guān)的句型結(jié)構(gòu)靈活的展開(kāi)作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進(jìn)行翻譯，所寫(xiě)句子要符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．