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從2008年6月1日起，國(guó)家將禁止商家免費(fèi)提供塑料袋，掀起全國(guó)“拒塑”的環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)。假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 為題，寫(xiě)一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語(yǔ)演講稿。 內(nèi)容包含：(1)。在購(gòu)物時(shí)用布袋子替代塑料袋；(2)。盡可能地再利用使用過(guò)的課本；(3)。離開(kāi)教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈；(4)。最好走路或騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)；(5)。簡(jiǎn)述理由：保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少污染，節(jié)約能源等。參考詞匯：布袋子cloth bag 塑料袋plastic bag 保護(hù)protect 能源energy污染pollution 課本textbook
　　What Can We Do for the Environment
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Answer 1

What can we do for the Enyironment
Our environment is becoming worse and worse, what can we do for the environment? Think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
The first thing we can do is to use closh bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to orotect the environment.The second thing we can do is yo reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classroomsin order to save energy.What’s more, It would be better if we walk oe ride a bike to school.We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste.
In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment,I believe we can make the world a better place to live.

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇介紹該為環(huán)保做些什么的提綱作文，文章總體應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是給出提示要點(diǎn)的作文， 所給提示的內(nèi)容一定要寫(xiě)全面，按照提示詞的思路進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中，應(yīng)適當(dāng)使用連詞，使文章過(guò)渡自然。最后檢查作文時(shí)，還要注意單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、字母大小寫(xiě)等細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文章使用了the first、the second這些詞，是的敘述非常條例。作者還使用了a little bit、instead of、in order to、what’s more、try one’s best，in fact等短語(yǔ)，都為文章增色不少。