Question

90后學(xué)生（post-90s students）有許多優(yōu)點(diǎn)如：樂于助人，關(guān)愛他人；精力充沛，興趣廣泛；自信勇敢等，但也有諸如：粗枝大葉，不善表達(dá)(express)，不善與人溝通交流，以及與長輩相處等缺點(diǎn)，請你按照以上提示寫一篇短文。具體要求：
1. 內(nèi)容包括以上提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 根據(jù)自己的感悟，對90后學(xué)生提出1-2點(diǎn)建議；
3. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚；
4. 字?jǐn)?shù)90左右;
5. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名.
As post-90s students, we have so many advantages. ________________________________
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Answer 1

As post-90s students, we have so many advantages. Firstly, we are both helpful and kind to others. Secondly, we are also energetic and have many hobbies. Besides, we are confident and brave, too.
However, we have some disadvantages as well. Some of us are so careless that they often make some mistakes. Some aren’t good at expressing themselves and even don’t know how to communicate with people. Also some others don’t know how to get on well with the elderly.
In my opinion, on one hand, we should work hard at all the subjects to improve ourselves. And on the other hand, we ought to try our best to get on well with people around us.

這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料比較簡單，需要自己圍繞材料適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意將90后學(xué)生的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)介紹清楚。在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱問題比較復(fù)雜，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。