Question

假如你叫Helen，請以My family為題，根據(jù)以下提示信息介紹她的家庭狀況。
可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)不少于40。

Family member	Job	Age	Favourite food
Helen	student	12	hamburger
Her father	doctor	36	noodles
Her mother	English teacher	37	meat

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Answer 1

One possible version:
Hello, my name is Helen. There are three people in my family. My father is 36 years old. He is a doctor in a hospital. He likes noodles very much. My mother is an English teacher. She is 37. Her favourite food is meat. I am twelve years old. I am a student in a middle school. Hamburger is my favourite food.I love my family!

試題分析：：本題是寫一篇以我的家庭為話題的書面表達(dá)，根據(jù)表格我們可以從家庭所包含的成員，每個(gè)成員的身份，年齡，職業(yè)，愛好等方面加以介紹，介紹家人時(shí)應(yīng)注意單數(shù)第三人稱的正確使用，在完成本寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注重語言的準(zhǔn)確性，時(shí)態(tài)的正確性和結(jié)構(gòu)的條理性，同時(shí)也可以使用there be的句型，應(yīng)該避免使用錯(cuò)詞，錯(cuò)句和錯(cuò)時(shí)態(tài)。
點(diǎn)評：在介紹某個(gè)范圍內(nèi)有某物可用there be的句型，在介紹家庭的成員所存在的情況，為一般情況，應(yīng)該注意用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，尤其注意單數(shù)第三人稱的使用。同時(shí)我們在寫作時(shí)也要注意語言的通順性和連貫性，單詞和句子的正確性，盡量使用自己會的語言，提高寫作的質(zhì)量。