Question

假如你是李梅，你的外國筆友Sally 來信詢問你的學校生活。請你給他回一封不少于60詞的信，告訴她你的學校生活，包括飲食、運動、學科以及你的感受。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。
Dear Sally,
Let me tell you about my school life.____________________
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Please write and tell me about your school life.
Best wishes,
Li Mei

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Sally,
Let me tell you about my school life. I usually have eggs, bread and milk for breakfast. I have lunch at school and I like to eat chicken, fruit and vegetables. They are good for me. I play sports for about two hours every day.I often play tennis and volleyball with my friends.They are difficult but interesting.I learn many subjects. My favorite subjects are music and biology. Music is great and relaxing. I can sing many songs. Biology helps me know more about plants and animals. I love my school life very much.
Please write and tell me about your school life.
Best wishes,
Li Mei

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，李梅寫給外國筆友Sally，介紹她的學校生活。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如： I have ......；They are ......；I can ......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要詢問Sally的學校生活。
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹寫信目的，接下來介紹在學校的飲食，運動，學科以及感受，最后希望Sally告訴她的學校生活。此處用了like to，are good for，play sports，helps me，know more about 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。