Question

上個(gè)星期天5月11號(hào)是母親節(jié)，某英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)站舉辦了以“My mother”為題的英語(yǔ)征文活動(dòng)，學(xué)會(huì)感恩，學(xué)會(huì)回報(bào)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，寫一篇短文，介紹你的母親和你們的真情故事。
提示：1、短文應(yīng)包括導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；
2、短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；
3、詞數(shù)不少于90字，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother.

Answer 1

My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

試題分析：這是一篇給話題作文。要求介紹發(fā)生在自己和母親身上的故事，要體現(xiàn)感恩和回報(bào)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱和第三人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如：定語(yǔ)從句The person I love most is my mother. “我最愛的人是我的媽媽�！� 不定式的使用I will do what I can to make my mother happy. “我會(huì)做我能做的一切來(lái)使她開心。”等等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，學(xué)會(huì)學(xué)以致用。使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。