Question

根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容的提示，以 “Changes in my hometown” 為題，用英語寫一篇80字左右的短文。

	過去	現(xiàn)在
環(huán)境	道路臟，狹小，到處是垃圾 有大塊的空地	道路寬闊干凈、路邊綠樹成蔭 有商店和高樓大廈
生活	矮小的房子 收音機(jī)、電視	新公寓 電腦、網(wǎng)絡(luò)和手機(jī)
交通	步行、騎車	公交車、出租車、私家車
你的觀點(diǎn)	……

Changes in my hometown

Great changes ___________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, the roads were narrow and very dirty with lots of rubbish.  And there used to be large open spaces. The houses people lived in were low. And few families had TV and radios. People went to work on foot or by bike. But now, the roads are wide and clean. Many trees are planted on both sides of the roads. Also, there are many shops and tall buildings. People now live in new departments with computers and Internet. Most of them have mobile phones. People usually go to work by bus or by car. I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life. I hope my hometown will be better and better.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了主題和內(nèi)容。在寫作前，要注意審清題意，不要漏掉信息點(diǎn)，并將信息點(diǎn)有條理的組織陳述。另外本文一定要注意動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，在描述過去情況的時(shí)候，可用一般過去時(shí)，描述現(xiàn)在情況時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。句子之間可適當(dāng)使用連詞使文章邏輯更緊密。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】本文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)齊全，表達(dá)通暢準(zhǔn)確。句中有很多有用的表達(dá)形式，如take place 發(fā)生；in the past 在過去；used to 過去通常；on foot 步行； better and better越來越好，I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past.我很高興見到家鄉(xiāng)的變化，但是我認(rèn)為記住過去仍然很重要；等等。句中也用到了一些連詞，如and, but, also等。

考點(diǎn)：圖表作文。