Question

假如你是陽光中學(xué)的一名初三學(xué)生Simon,你要寫封信給青少年專家Sigmund Friend,告訴他你的煩惱，并請求幫助。請根據(jù)下列表格中所列的信息，完成一封信。

個人信息	1998年9月10日出生；校足球隊成員，喜歡踢足球；最喜歡紅色，因為……
性格特點	勤奮，謙虛；有時多慮；注意細節(jié)；自信(舉一例)……
煩惱	作業(yè)多，經(jīng)常熬夜，睡眠不足，上課疲勞；父母不許我在外面踢球到很晚；他們只關(guān)心考試分數(shù)，沒注意到我的進步，我已經(jīng)盡力……
愿望	希望得到有價值的建議。

要求：1. 表達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫。

          2. 要點必須包括表格中的所有信息，可以適當發(fā)揮。

          3. 詞數(shù)100左右(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Sigmund Friend,

     My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. __________                  __

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What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes!

Simon.                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

 Dear Sigmund Friend,

     My name is Simon. I’m a Grade 9 student in Sunshine Middle School. I was born on September 10^th, 1998. My favourite sport is football and I’m a member of the school football team. I like red best because red is the colour of heat and represents power and strong feelings. Wearing red can make it easier for me to take action.

     I’m hard-working and modest. I worry too much at times. I always pay attention to details. I’m confident and I’m never afraid of making a speech to a large group of people.

Now I have too much homework every day. I often stay up late to complete the exercises. I don’t get enough sleep and I feel tired in class, My parents don’t allow me to stay out late to play football. They care only about marks after exams. They don’t see my progress, but I have tried my best to do it well.

Can you please offer me some valuable suggestions?

What should I do? Can you help me? I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes!

Simon.      

【解析】

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料簡單�？忌�在寫作之前必須認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，要求寫自己的性格和煩惱、愿望。應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱用第一人稱。注意仔細閱讀表格，分析英語的正確表達和句子之間的銜接。

【亮點說明】 本文做到了包含所有內(nèi)容要點，語句通順，標點符號運用正確。還運用了favourite，pay attention to , be afraid of, too much homework, feel tired , allow … to …, because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句、動名詞作主語，等等。并注意了句子開頭的變化和的銜接如：Now, but等等。

考點：提綱作文。