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2．時(shí)下很多人外出旅游，泰山又是五岳之首，很受游人的青睞．假設(shè)你是一名導(dǎo)游，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示，寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹游客在登山過(guò)程中應(yīng)該注意的事項(xiàng)．要求100字左右，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Dos	Don'ts
爬山時(shí)，身穿舒適的服裝與運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋，因?yàn)椤��?br />帶足夠的食品和水以保持體力	為避免火災(zāi)，不準(zhǔn)吸煙
爬山時(shí)小心掉落的小石塊	不要追逐嬉戲
父母好好照看孩子	不要越過(guò)警戒線，因?yàn)椤?/TD>
可以照相	不要亂扔垃圾
我希望你們…

參考詞匯：keep strength 保持體力；the warning line 警戒線
Hello，everyone．Welcome to Mount Tai．Here are some rules for you．
While climbing you should wear comfortable clothes and shoes because they will make you feel less tired．Please take enough food and water to keep strength．When you climb the mountain you should be careful of falling stones．Parents must take good care of your children．To avoid a fire，you mustn't smoke．Don't run or play with each other or cross the warning line because it's too dangerous．You can take photos but you can't throw rubbish everywhere．
I hope you will have a good trip．DearSir．
I hope …

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹游客在登山過(guò)程中應(yīng)該注意的事項(xiàng)．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第二人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1應(yīng)該注意的（1）爬山時(shí)，身穿舒適的服裝與運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋，因?yàn)椤�，帶足夠的食品和水以保持體力；（2）爬山時(shí)小心掉落的小石塊；（3）父母好好照看孩子（4）可以照相
2不應(yīng)該做的：（1）為避免火災(zāi)，不準(zhǔn)吸煙；（2）不要追逐嬉戲；（3）不要越過(guò)警戒線，因?yàn)椤��?）不要亂扔垃圾
3我希望…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
make sb do sth 讓某人做某事
be careful of 小心…
take care of 照顧
take photos 照相
【高分句型】
1．①While climbing you should wear comfortable clothes and shoes②because they will make you feel less tired．
①while climbing是省略句，完整表達(dá)是while you are climbing．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．make sb do sth 讓某人做某事

2．To avoid a fire，you mustn't smoke．
動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)．
3．You can take photos but you can't throw rubbish everywhere．
but連詞，表示但是，前后句子的含義形成對(duì)照．

解答 Hello，everyone．Welcome to Mount Tai．Here are some rules for you．
While climbing you should wear comfortable clothes and shoes because they will make you feel less tired．【高分句型】（爬山時(shí)，身穿舒適的服裝與運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋）Please take enough food and water to keep strength．（帶足夠的食品和水以保持體力）When you climb the mountain you should be careful of falling stones．（爬山時(shí)小心掉落的小石塊）Parents must take good care of your children．（父母好好照看孩子）To avoid a fire，you mustn't smoke．【高分句型】（為避免火災(zāi)，不準(zhǔn)吸煙）Don't run or play with each other or cross the warning line because it's too dangerous．（不要追逐嬉戲不要越過(guò)警戒線）You can take photos but you can't throw rubbish everywhere．【高分句型】（可以照相，不要亂扔垃圾）
I hope you will have a good trip．Dear Sir．（我希望大家旅行愉快）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類作文寫(xiě)作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．