Question

寫(xiě)作

假設(shè)你是李華，最近你校組織了一場(chǎng)討論。討論的主題是：本市要不要修地鐵(subway)？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，給某報(bào)社編輯寫(xiě)一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

要求：

1)表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；

2)必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

3)詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等。

Dear Editor,

　　The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．

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Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Editor,

　　The students in our school had a heated discussion about whether a subway should be built in our city．

　　Sixty percent of the students are for the idea of building a subway．Compared with other forms of transport, they think, the subway is more convenient, faster and safer．It can save energy and have less pollution．It can make the traffic on the ground less crowded and reduce traffic accidents．

　　However, forty percent of the students are against the idea．They think that building a subway will cost too much．It's a waste of money．We should build more highways and railways instead with the money．What's more, building a subway may destroy some cultural relics underground．

　　I think a subway is a sign of a modern city．By building a subway, we can travel around our city more easily．But we should spend as little money as possible building the subway．

　　評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

　　一檔文17－20分：寫(xiě)出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚、語(yǔ)言流暢，有句式變化，基本無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(1-2個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)，或有少量由于使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)而引起的語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義理解。

　　二檔文13－16分：基本寫(xiě)出全部?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)，層次清楚、語(yǔ)言流暢，有少量語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤(3－4個(gè)錯(cuò)誤)。

　　三檔文9－12分：寫(xiě)出大部分內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言基本通順，有一些語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，基本不影響意思表達(dá)。

　　四檔文5－8分：寫(xiě)出一半左右有關(guān)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言不太通順，語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、錯(cuò)誤較多，只有少數(shù)句子可讀，影響理解。

　　五檔文0－4分：言不達(dá)意，不知所云；只有(1－2個(gè))句子可讀。