Question

根據(jù)表中的信息，以“My friend”為題寫一篇60詞左右的短文。

My friend

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Answer 1

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My friend

    I have a good friend. His name is Li Ming. He's 13 years old. He's in Class Three, Grade One at No.1 Middle School. He likes reading, doing sports and listening to music. He's tall. He wears glasses. He has short and black hair. He has some good friends. His teachers and classmates all like him

【解析】

試題分析：這是篇給材料作文。材料中已經(jīng)明確了所要寫的內(nèi)容。寫作時(shí)不要遺漏這些要點(diǎn)�？梢愿鶕�(jù)表格內(nèi)容將各個(gè)信息一樣樣表達(dá)清楚。文章可使用第三人稱，注意主謂一致，單詞拼寫的大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的正確使用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇作文緊扣材料，要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確清晰。He's in Class Three, Grade One at No.1 Middle School他在第一中學(xué)一年級(jí)三班。句中專有名詞都大寫了，并且名詞按照從小范圍到大范圍的規(guī)律排列。He likes reading, doing sports and listening to music他喜歡看書，做運(yùn)動(dòng)和聽音樂。Like doing sth喜歡做某事。

考點(diǎn)：圖表作文。