Question

在每個人的成長過程中，都或多或少有一些變化，現(xiàn)在你已經(jīng)是即將畢業(yè)的初三的學(xué)生了，請以Great Changes In My Life! 為題寫一篇短文。
內(nèi)容包括：
生活習(xí)慣上的改變
學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)上的轉(zhuǎn)變
學(xué)習(xí)方法上的改進(jìn)
要求：
詞數(shù)：８０詞左右。
文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。   
Great Changes In My Life!
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Answer 1

Great changes in my life
As I learn more and grow up gradually, I change in many aspects. My teachers say I study harder and my parents say I am more sensible than before. As for me, I want to learn more in school and be a good boy to make my parents happy. Now, I am more focused on lessons and finish my homework actively. I know that only by working hard in study can I get a bright future. At home, I often help my mother in housework. I want to be more independent so that I can take good care of myself. I don’t want my parents worry too much about me. Besides, I like reading now. I realize books can be my friend, too. It is really interesting.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱、一般過去和現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，注意主謂一致及時間狀語與時態(tài)的一致問題。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文所用句式較為簡單，但是由于作者敘述順序的巧妙安排，加上一些連詞和短語的使用，如：grow up長大；be focused on 集中，注意；so that以便；As for關(guān)于，至于等，使得本文看起來邏輯清楚，條理分明。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.