Question

假如你是Lily，是一名九年級(jí)學(xué)生，每天都在為考試而學(xué)。請(qǐng)仔細(xì)閱讀下面的圖片，并根據(jù)要求給青少年問題專家Abby寫一封求助信。
要求：1．結(jié)合圖片寫出自己面臨的問題（至少?gòu)娜齻�(gè)方面寫）；
2．希望得到幫助。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：90左右，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)：
2．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順。
Dear Abby,
I'm a Grade 9 student. I'm very busy studying for exams every day. So I have some problems.____________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Lily

Answer 1

Dear Abby,
I'm a Grade 9 student. I'm very busy studying for exams every day. So I have some problems.
First, I have so much homework to do every day that I don’t have anytime for my hobbies. Second, I have to stay up late to finish all the exercises, so I can’t get enough sleep and I feel sleepy in class the next day. Third. because of not having time for sport and sleep, I often feel tired and stressed. Also I fall ill easily. I don’t know if I can keep on with study. What should I do? I’d like you to give me some advice.
Yours,
Lily

試題分析：這是一封看圖作文。主要是寫在九年級(jí)所遇到了困難。從圖中我們可以看到一個(gè)女孩在做著一大堆的作業(yè)，由此可聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際感受寫下面臨的問題。同時(shí)，這是一封求助信，結(jié)尾可要求別人給你提供建議。所以，寫作時(shí)要注意文章的完整性。注意句子的完整性和連貫性。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)清晰。在寫問題的時(shí)候，用了first，second，third使文章結(jié)構(gòu)更明了。另外，文章用了很多的短語和句式，如：so…that…如此…以至于…; stay up 熬夜；because of 因?yàn)椋籯eep on with跟上等等；另外用了一些狀語從句，例如so引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句等，使文章更緊湊和流暢。