Question

本月我市開展以“做文明市民，遵守交通規(guī)則”為主題的交通安全宣傳月活動。請你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勅绾巫袷亟煌ǚㄒ?guī)。

提示：

1. 步行時(shí)，要往路邊走, 橫過公路之前，要看看左邊和右邊；

2. 乘車時(shí)，要排隊(duì)候車，車未停穩(wěn)，不能上落；

3. 開車時(shí)，在交通燈處應(yīng)減慢速度，不要闖紅燈(drive through the red traffic lights)；

4.……

要求:

1.用上所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；  2. 語言正確，行文流暢，書寫規(guī)范；

3.詞數(shù)：80左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); 4.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及校名。

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe, everyone should follow traffic rules.

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                                  

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

In order to keep the road orderly and people safe, everyone should follow traffic rules. When you walk, you should walk at the side of the road. Always be careful and look left and right before you cross the road. When many passengers are waiting for the bus, please stand in line and wait for your turn. Don’t push others. Don’t get on or get off the bus until it has stopped. If you drive, you should slow down at the traffic lights. Don’t drive through the red traffic lights. You must never drink. Don’t drive too fast.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，句式，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意情態(tài)動詞should后面動詞用原形。為了是表達(dá)更有邏輯性，可以使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評：此類作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫作常識，不犯低級錯誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會有法可依。