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根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示和要求，以“My Dream Job”為題寫一篇短文．

內(nèi)容提示：1．想成為一名記者；

2．多讀書，勤寫作，向報刊、雜志投稿……；

3．高中畢業(yè)后去北京上大學；

4．想到電視臺工作，游祖國大好河山，觀世界風云變幻；

5．通過努力，夢想成真．

要求：1．條理清楚，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；

2．可根據(jù)提示適當增加內(nèi)容；

3．不少于80詞．

答案：
解析：

One possible version：

　　I like talking to people and asking them questions, so I want to be a journalist(reporter)when I grow up．The job is interesting but kind of dangerous．Now I'm going to do some more reading and writing and write articles for newspapers and magazines．I'm going to a university in Beijing after senior(high)school．Next I'm going to work for a TV station as a journalist(reporter)．Then I'm going to travel throughout China and all over the world．I think my dream will come true someday if I work hard．

　　評分說明：

　　1．選擇題部分凡與答案不符的，不給分．

　　2．填空題部分只要意思正確，語言通順，符合答題要求，符合英語表達習慣的，均可以給分．

　　3．單詞拼寫錯誤不給分，大小寫錯誤每1－2處扣0.5分，每3－4處扣1分，本小題本句話分數(shù)扣完為止．

　　4．書面表達題評分檔次：

　�、俚谝粰n(9－10分)

　　信息完整，表達流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤．

　�、诘诙䴔n(7－8分)

　　信息基本完整，表達較流暢，有少量錯誤，但不影響意思表達．

　　③第三檔(5－6分)

　　能傳遞部分信息，表達不夠流暢，語言錯誤較多，但句子基本可讀．

　�、艿谒臋n(3－4分)

　　只能傳遞少量信息，表達不通順，語言錯誤多，只有少量句子可讀．

　　⑤第五檔(1－2分)

　　只能傳遞個別信息，表達不清楚，只有個別句子可讀．


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