Question

綠色的環(huán)境能夠使我們健康、愉悅，成為環(huán)保達(dá)人已經(jīng)是一種時(shí)尚。同學(xué)們，你們想成為環(huán)保達(dá)人嗎？那我們應(yīng)該怎么做呢？請(qǐng)以To Be a Greener Person為題寫一篇短文。
詞數(shù)：80左右。
溫馨提示：1．短文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)、所在學(xué)校名稱。
2．這些詞匯也許對(duì)你有幫助：
save,  turn off,  less shopping,  walk,  bike,  cloth bag,  plant
                         
                                                                                    
                                                                                    

Answer 1

To Be a Greener Person
As we all know, good environment can make us healthy and feel happy. Being a Greener Person is a very popular thing. Do you want to be a greener person? I do. But how can we become a greener person? I think we must do something. For example, we should save water. When we brush our teeth, we should turn off water. We also should save electricity. When we leave a room, we must turn off the lights. We must walk to school or ride a bike instead of taking a car. What’s more, we should plant more trees, because it is good for our environment.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以如何做一名環(huán)保達(dá)人來(lái)寫一篇文章。這個(gè)題目是開(kāi)放性的，在題目中并沒(méi)有給我們提供信息，這需要我們自己考慮，發(fā)揮想象力。寫作時(shí)，我們可以結(jié)合日常生活以及教材中有關(guān)環(huán)保話題的短語(yǔ)和句型發(fā)表自己的看法。如節(jié)約用水、用電、多種樹、交通工具要環(huán)保等等。題目中給我們提供的這些詞和短語(yǔ)是非常有用的，寫作時(shí)可以把他們用上。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性以及語(yǔ)句的連貫和流暢。本篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的短文，在這篇短文中，作者結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活，利用自己所學(xué)過(guò)的關(guān)于環(huán)保的知識(shí)，將如何成為一名環(huán)保達(dá)人表達(dá)了出來(lái)。文章時(shí)態(tài)、人稱運(yùn)用合理得當(dāng)，符合題目的要求。在短文中作者給了我們一些環(huán)保的建議，如save water and electricity、ride a bike to school、plant more trees等，這些建議都是非常合理的，符合題意的。表達(dá)時(shí)運(yùn)用句式正確，連貫。如I think we must do something、When we leave a room, we must turn off the lights.、We must walk to school or ride a bike instead of taking a car.、What’s more, we should plant more trees, because it is good for our environment。