Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

As the saying goes, chance favored the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my experience. I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up play volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me but pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation which led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was full prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team.

From this, I am firmly convincing that we are able to seize a chance as long as I get well prepared.

Answer 1

【答案】

As the saying goes, chance the prepared mind. I learned this from one of my . I was not chosen as member of the volleyball team of our school. Because of this, I decided to give up volleyball. Luckily, my best friend stopped me pointed out that it was my laziness and poor preparation led to my failure. After that, I practiced playing volleyball on every day. When another tryout arrived, I was prepared and tried my best. As a result, I was selected and became an important player on our school team. From this, I am firmly that we are able to seize a chance as long as get well prepared.

【解析】

第一處：句意：俗話說，機(jī)遇垂青有準(zhǔn)備的人。句子的主語chance是單數(shù)，所以謂語用單數(shù)。故favored 改為favors。

第二處：one of后面跟可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，指“……之一”。故experience改為experiences。

第三處：此處指“作為校排球隊(duì)的一員”。故as后加a。

第四處：give up doing…是固定搭配，指“放棄做某事”。故play改為playing。

第五處：前后兩句是語意的順承，并非轉(zhuǎn)折。故but改為and。

第六處：本句運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型“It is/ was + 被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+ that/ who(當(dāng)強(qiáng)調(diào)主語且主語指人)+ 其他部分”，強(qiáng) 調(diào)了主語“my laziness and poor preparation”。故which改為that。

第七處：every day指“每天”的意思，在句子中直接作時(shí)間狀語。故去掉on。

第八處：修飾謂語部分“was prepared”要用副詞。故full改為fully。

第九處：be convinced that是固定句式，指“相信、確信、承認(rèn)某事”。句意：由此，我堅(jiān)信只要我們做好充 分準(zhǔn)備，我們就能抓住機(jī)會(huì)。convincing改為convinced。

第十處：與主句中的主語we相一致，此處也是指“我們”。句意：由此，我堅(jiān)信只要我們做好充分準(zhǔn)備，我 們就能抓住機(jī)會(huì)。故I改為we。