Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò) (每小題1分，共10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I’m writing to make complaint about the book you send to me. Several week ago, I placed an order on your online store for a copy of Oliver Twist. This morning, I final received a package from your bookstore and with eager I unpacked it. But in my disappointment, I found the back cover of the book missed. Although it won’t spoil the reading experience, but I do wish to have a perfect copy. Could you please send me other as soon as possible? This shows there are still room for improvement concerning your customer service.

Answer 1

【答案】

I’m writing to make complaint about the book you to me. Several ago, I placed an order on your online store for a copy of Oliver Twist. This morning, I received a package from your bookstore and with I unpacked it. But my disappointment, I found the back cover of the book . Although it won’t spoil the reading experience, I do wish to have a perfect copy. Could you please send me as soon as possible? This shows there still room for improvement concerning your customer service.

【解析】

第一處：complaint前加a。make a complaint是固定搭配，意為＂抱怨＂。

第二處：send→sent。根據(jù)下文可知，作者已經(jīng)收到了書，所以send是過(guò)去發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

第三處：week→weeks。week為可數(shù)名詞，且結(jié)合前面的several 可知，此處應(yīng)用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第四處：final→finally。此處意為＂今天上午，我終于收到了你們書店(寄出)的包裹＂，應(yīng)用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故用finally。

第五處：eager→eagerness。此處表示＂帶著渴望，我打開了包裹＂，with后面跟情感名詞，表示＂帶著……的感情＂。

第六處：in→to。此處表示＂令我失望的是＂，應(yīng)用to my disappointment。

第七處：missed→missing。＂我＂發(fā)現(xiàn)這本書的封底不見(jiàn)了。此處在句中是形容詞作賓補(bǔ)，missing意為＂缺失的＂，符合語(yǔ)境。

第八處：刪去but。Although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，but連接兩個(gè)并列句，此處為兩種句型的雜糅，故刪去but。

第九處：other→another。此處表示另外一本書，應(yīng)用another。

第十處：are→is。這表明你們的客戶服務(wù)方面仍然有改進(jìn)的空間。room表示＂空間＂的意思時(shí)是不可數(shù)名詞，故用單數(shù)is。