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15．假設你是李華，上周你參加了英語作文競賽，并獲得了一等獎．請你用英語給作文指導老師Jack寫一封感謝信，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．告知獲獎；
2．介紹比賽情況；
3．表達獲獎感受．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
How are you？I am writing to let you know that I won the first prize in the English composition contest last week．（高分句型一）Before the contest，I was very nervous．But when I began writing，I thought of all your efforts that you had made to help me during the past few months and gradually I calmed myself down．Although the question and answer section was the most challenging，I got through it quite smoothly thanks to all your suggestions．（高分句型二）When the judge announced the result I was very excited but it was really a pity that you were not there．Upon knowing the result，I couldn't wait to express my appreciation of your help．（高分句型三）
Please accept my warmest thanks．Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設你是李華，上周你參加了英語作文競賽，并獲得了一等獎．請你用英語給作文指導老師Jack寫一封感謝信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：告知獲獎；介紹比賽情況；表達獲獎感受．  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：the first prize一等獎；think of想起；make efforts to do 不遺余力地去做；gradually逐漸地；thanks to幸虧，由于；
I am writing to let you know that I won the first prize in the English composition contest last week．（高分句型一）
Although the question and answer section was the most challenging，I got through it quite smoothly thanks to all your suggestions．（高分句型二）
Upon knowing the result，I couldn't wait to express my appreciation of your help．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
       How are you？I am writing to let you know that I won the first prize in the English composition contest last week．（高分句型一）Before the contest，I was very nervous．But when I began writing，I thought of all your efforts that you had made to help me during the past few months and gradually I calmed myself down．Although the question and answer section was the most challenging，I got through it quite smoothly thanks to all your suggestions．（高分句型二）When the judge announced the result I was very excited but it was really a pity that you were not there．Upon knowing the result，I couldn't wait to express my appreciation of your help．（高分句型三）
       Please accept my warmest thanks．Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．