Question

【題目】為了了解目前高中階段師生關(guān)系的現(xiàn)狀，某知名英文報社推出“師生關(guān)系大家談”欄目。假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生李華，請用英文給該欄目寫一篇短文。

包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1. 你校的師生關(guān)系現(xiàn)狀；

2. 你個人與老師的關(guān)系；

3. 你對良好師生關(guān)系的看法。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

In general, the teachers and students are on good terms in our school. We respect each other.

As for me, an out-going person, I’m quite willing to share my thoughts with my teachers. Whenever I have any difficulty, I like to turn to my teachers, and they always show love and concern for me and give me strong support and good advice.

In my opinion, teachers and students should enjoy an equal relationship. That is to say, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers. Thus we could exchange ideas freely and both teachers and students will benefit from such a warm relationship.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)已給出。寫作時可結(jié)合自身實(shí)際情況書寫，同時要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運(yùn)用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文是一篇英語短文，內(nèi)容齊全，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，布局合理，采用三段式，使用高級句子。Whenever I have any difficulty, I like to turn to my teachers, Whenever引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；That is to say, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers. while在此引導(dǎo)并列句，讓前后形成鮮明對比；另外，In general, As for me, That is to say, Thus為文章增色添彩。