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刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．

Dear Barbara，
How are you？Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you．I have admitted to Berkely school in California．More than 3000students took exams for it，but only a few was chosen and I was one of them．Therefore，my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against me going there．They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel homesick．They can't imagine so young a girl like me live alone．They advise me to choose a university near my home instead．Then I would be able to continue living with them．How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up？
Yours Faithfully
Jane Blair．

分析 作者給朋友寫(xiě)了一封信，信中告訴對(duì)方被一所學(xué)校錄取，但是父母并不高興，原因是離家太遠(yuǎn)不能住在一起，父母建議他上一所離家近的大學(xué)以便能住在一起．

解答 Dear Barbara，
How are you？Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you．I have∧admitted to Berkely school in California．More than 3000students took exams for it，but only a few was chosen and I was one of them．Therefore，my parents are not happy about it．They are strong against me going there．They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid of I will feel homesick．They can't imagine so young a girl like me live alone．They advise me to choose a university near my home instead．Then I would be able to continue living with them．How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up？
Yours Faithfully
Jane Blair．
詳解：
1．去掉a； 考查冠詞．news"新聞"是不可數(shù)名詞，所以前面不能加a．
2．加been；考查語(yǔ)態(tài)，根據(jù)句意"我已經(jīng)被Berkeley 這所學(xué)校錄取"，be admitted to是英語(yǔ)的固定搭配"被錄取"，而且是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，所以加been．
3．was改成were；考查謂語(yǔ)．根據(jù)句意"有3000多名學(xué)生參加考試，但是只有很少的人被選出"，a few指的是為數(shù)不多的學(xué)生，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用復(fù)數(shù)．
4．Therefore改成However；考查連詞，根據(jù)前文我是在那些被錄取的少數(shù)學(xué)生之中，父母卻不高興，兩句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，therefore是"因此"，however"然而"．
5．strong改成strongly；考查副詞．根據(jù)句意"他們堅(jiān)決反對(duì)去那里"，這里要用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)be against，strongly是副詞．
6．too改成so；考查固定句型．so+形容詞+that"如此…以至于…"，根據(jù)句意"如此遠(yuǎn)以至于他們一整年見(jiàn)不到我"，所以把too改成so．
7．of改成that；考查賓語(yǔ)從句．"I will feel homesick"是一個(gè)句子，be afraid of因?yàn)閛f是介詞后不可以跟句子，把of改成that就成了一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，如果把of去掉則是一個(gè)省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
8．live改成living；考查非謂語(yǔ)．imagine 后面只能跟動(dòng)詞的ing做賓語(yǔ)，所以把live改成living．
9．would改成will；根據(jù)句意"他們建議我選擇離家很近的大學(xué)，那樣我能夠繼續(xù)和他們住在一起"，這是將來(lái)的事情，所以用將來(lái)時(shí)，把would改成will．
10．what改成that；考查名詞性從句．本題是一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句，從句是一個(gè)主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子，不需要賓語(yǔ)，所以用that引導(dǎo)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)考查涉及面廣，但卻有所側(cè)重．考查點(diǎn)測(cè)試頻率最高的是動(dòng)詞，涉及動(dòng)詞考查的有時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式、情態(tài)動(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞的用法等．此外，還考查名詞、介詞、代詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、連詞等，還涉及到句型結(jié)構(gòu)、行文邏輯、固定搭配等．

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