【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Hi Susan,

I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon, and I was hold up on my way back. Just before I turned corner of Park Street, I happened to see an accident. A little girl hurt and her mother needed help. So I helped them going to the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. When I got back, it were already 6 p. m. I hope you understand.

Thank you!

Lu Hua

【答案】1. 去掉第二個to

2. mean→meant

3. and→but

4. hold→held

5. turned后加the

6. hurt前加was

7. going→go

8. here→there

9. hour→hours

10. were→was

【解析】

本文為一篇書信。信中作者為自己沒能按時歸還自行車道歉，并說明原因。

1．考查介詞。句意：我很抱歉昨天沒能按時還你的自行車。結(jié)合句意，return為及物動詞，不需要加介詞，歸還你的自行車應(yīng)為return your bike。故去掉第二個to。

2．考查時態(tài)。句意：我本打算下午四點前還給你，但是我在回來的路上耽擱了。結(jié)合后文I was hold up on my way back. 我在回來的路上耽擱了，推測打算下午四點前還車發(fā)生在過去， mean應(yīng)該用過去式，mean的過去式為meant。故mean改為meant。

3．考查連詞。句意：我本打算下午四點前還給你，但是我在回來的路上耽擱了。結(jié)合前文I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon我本打算下午四點前還給你，I was held up on my way back我在回來的路上耽擱了，前后文有明顯的轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系， but作連詞表示轉(zhuǎn)折。故and改為but。

4．考查過去分詞。句意：我本打算下午四點前還給你，但是我在回來的路上耽擱了。分析句子可知，作者與阻擋為邏輯上的被動關(guān)系，用被動語態(tài)，hold的過去分詞形式held。故hold改為held。

5．考查冠詞。句意：就在我轉(zhuǎn)過帕克街的拐角時，碰巧看到一場事故。the corner of為固定搭配，意為“……的街角”。故turned后加the。

6．考查be動詞。句意：一個小女孩受傷了，她的母親需要幫助。分析句子可知，主語為A little girl，表語為hurt，缺少謂語，且女孩受傷發(fā)生在過去。故hurt前加was。

7．考查動詞。句意：所以我?guī)椭齻內(nèi)チ俗罱尼t(yī)院。應(yīng)為help sb. (to) do sth.為固定搭配，意為“幫助某人做某事”，動詞應(yīng)該用動詞原形。故going改為go。

8．考查副詞。句意：我在那里待了一個半小時，確保那個女孩沒事。結(jié)合句意，作者回憶過去發(fā)生的事，應(yīng)該描述為在那里待了一個半小時。故here改為there。

9．考查名詞。句意：我在那里待了一個半小時，確保那個女孩沒事。分析句子可知，一個半小時應(yīng)該用hour的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故hour改為hours。

10．考查主謂一致。句意：我回來的時候已經(jīng)是下午6點了，希望你能理解。分析句子可知，主語為it，謂語動詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，且發(fā)生在過去，用was。故were改為was。

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