Question

假定你是李華，你的一位美國(guó)朋友Jane在北京學(xué)習(xí)中文兩年，即將回國(guó)�，F(xiàn)在由你給她發(fā)E-mail，邀請(qǐng)她參加為她舉辦的歡送會(huì)，要點(diǎn)如下：

(1)祝賀她順利通過(guò)考試，她的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)步很大，為她驕傲;  (2)感謝她幫助你們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ);

(3)時(shí)間：星期六晚六點(diǎn);                     (4)地點(diǎn)：陽(yáng)光俱樂(lè)部(The Sun Club)302房間;

注意：(1)須包括以上主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫;

(2)詞數(shù)：120 ---- 150。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

(3)參考詞匯：歡送會(huì) farewell party

Dear Jane,

Congratulations on your passing all the exams.

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

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One Possible Version

Dear Jane,

    Congratulations on your passing all the exams. I am delighted that you have made great progress in the two years of your studying Chinese in Beijing. There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work. We are proud of you. And thank you very much for your help with our English. Without your help, we wouldn’t have found English easy and interesting to learn. The wonderful time which we spent together will never be forgotten.

So a farewell party for you has been prepared before you leave for the US. It will be held in Room 302 in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. I wonder if you could come by 6:00 p.m. Our friends and I would appreciate it if you could come to the party.

Looking forward to your early reply.

【解析】

試題分析：本文為提綱式的作文，所選內(nèi)容與我們的生活相關(guān)，又是考生比較熟悉的書信格式，考生只要把所給要點(diǎn)逐條陳述，適度發(fā)揮，不要逐句翻譯，注意使用一些過(guò)渡句或過(guò)渡詞來(lái)使句子讀起來(lái)流暢。但是要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)檫@封信是給出對(duì)方一些建議，還要注意寫作時(shí)的語(yǔ)氣要客氣，謙虛。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如I am delighted that you have made great progress in the two years of your studying Chinese in Beijing., There is no doubt that all you have gained is the result of your hard work., It said in your letter that you were punished for using cellphones, which puzzled you. It is right for school to prevent you from using cellphones還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句及before，if引導(dǎo)的從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：And；So等等。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。