Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假設(shè)英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(Λ)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Our government is trying hard to build the energy-saving society. It is everybody’s duty to work hardly and reach this goal. But, not everybody has realized the important of it. Take our school for example. Sometimes we can see that lights and computers are still on after class. Some students even forget to turn on the tap after using it and have water run all the time. Our papers are printed on only one side, which causing much waste. It’s time we did something to avoid this kind of waste. Firstly, make sure that all the lights and other electric facilities turned off when we leave the room. Try to form the habit of turning off the tap immediate after using it. What’s more, papers should be printed on both sides and reuse if possible.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】the→a

【2】hardly →hard

【3】But→However

【4】important→importance

【5】on→off

【6】run→running

【7】causing→causes/去掉which

【8】加are

【9】immediate→immediately

【10】reuse→reused

【解析】

試題分析：建設(shè)節(jié)能型社會(huì)是我們每個(gè)人的職責(zé)，然而并不是每個(gè)人都意識(shí)到了這一點(diǎn)。作者在文中提到了一些浪費(fèi)水電等的現(xiàn)象，而且在文中也提出了一些具體的措施，比如要養(yǎng)成人走燈滅，隨手關(guān)掉水龍頭等這樣的好習(xí)慣。

【1】the→a 考查冠詞。泛指，建設(shè)一個(gè)資源節(jié)約型社會(huì)，所以用a。

【2】hardly →hard 考查形容詞。hardly 表示幾乎不，hard表示努力的，所以用hard。

【3】But→However 考查連詞。But, not everybody has realized the important of it.前句講建設(shè)節(jié)能型社會(huì)是我們的職責(zé)，而后句說(shuō)并不是每個(gè)人都意識(shí)到了重要性，由此可知，前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用However。

【4】important→importance考查名詞。not everybody has realized the important of it分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知realize動(dòng)詞后面應(yīng)該是賓語(yǔ)，而important形容詞不可做賓語(yǔ)，故用importance

【5】on→off考查介詞。Some students even forget to turn on the tap after using it 從句意判斷使用后應(yīng)該是關(guān)掉水龍頭，而turn on意思是“打開(kāi)”，用off。

【6】run→running 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。and have water run all the time. Have sb dosth指讓某人去做某事；而此處是讓水一直流著，強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作的持續(xù)，所以應(yīng)該是have sb doing sth ，故用running。

【7】causing→causes/去掉which 考查動(dòng)詞和關(guān)系詞。which causing much waste.分析結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處如果是定語(yǔ)從句，causing是現(xiàn)在分詞不做謂語(yǔ)，所以把causing改為cuases； 如果是分詞做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，那么就應(yīng)該把which去掉，用causes/去掉which。

【8】加are 考查動(dòng)詞。other electric facilities turned off 句意是把電燈等電器關(guān)掉，此處是被動(dòng)意思，所以改為被動(dòng)句，而且文章是講平時(shí)要養(yǎng)成的習(xí)慣，所以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，而且根據(jù)主謂一致原則，所以加are。

【9】immediate→immediately 考查副詞。Try to form the habit of turning off the tap immediate after using it. immediate是形容詞用來(lái)做表語(yǔ)或者定語(yǔ)，而此處是做狀語(yǔ)，用immediately。

【10】reuse→reused考查動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，動(dòng)詞與主語(yǔ)之間是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，用reused。