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4．Time to give thanks
When it comes to Thanksgiving，turkey may be the first thing that comes to mind．It's the right picture，but it's not complete．
Celebrated on the fourth Thursday in November every year，Thanksgiving Day is a time for thanksgiving and feasts．It's about expressing your gratitude to the important people and all the good things in your life．
Americans celebrate Thanksgiving with much warmth and keep many traditional customs．Here we introduce two of the rules Americans typically follow on this day．
1．Time for prayers and paying back
Thanksgiving Day has been associated with prayers in church and in homes for centuries．Attending church prayer services in the morning is the first step of many celebrators on Thanksgiving Day．The churches provide worship （禮拜） services and organize special events for the occasion．
Before Thanksgiving meals，some families gather together and read prayers to thank God for his kindness and the gifts he has bestowed upon （給予） them in the form of friends and family．
Some people also do voluntary community work on this day，as a way of paying back．
2．Family reunions and showing gratitude
Like China's Spring Festival，preparing a big meal and bringing the family together at home is a long-standing tradition of Thanksgiving．Distances don't really matter as relatives return home to be with their family，no matter how far away．
寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容
（1）以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
（2）以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)是時(shí)候感恩了的想法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你認(rèn)為我們中國(guó)人有沒(méi)有必要過(guò)"感恩節(jié)"？為什么？
（2）以你自己的經(jīng)歷或者身邊的人為例，闡述重視感恩的必要性；
（3）總結(jié)你的觀點(diǎn)．
寫(xiě)作要求
（1）作文中可以使用實(shí)例來(lái)支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容論述，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
（2）作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)．
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．
This passageis mainly about the customs of a western traditional festival，ThanksgivingDay，which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by duringthe festival．
Afterreading the passage，I had a better understanding of Thanksgiving Day．In myopinion，since the festival has a lovely and healthy theme，why not do as theAmericans do？Don't you think giving thanks to things and people around us isvery necessary？We can't deny it is a good chance to spread kindness andconsideration．
Take myselffor example．Because I am busy in studying on weekdays，I have little time tolook after my parents，which makes me guilty．In order to reward them and makethem relaxed on the weekend，I get up early in the morning and preparebreakfast for them willingly，which makes them delighted．
So it isvital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good andany person that is nice．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作，這類(lèi)作文可按照"三段式"模板寫(xiě)：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過(guò)渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語(yǔ)言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般過(guò)去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)一般用第三人稱(chēng)．重要短語(yǔ)：abideby （遵守，信守…），have abetter understanding of sth （對(duì)…有更好地理解），give thanksto…（對(duì)…感恩），take…forexample （舉…為例），be busy in…（忙于…），…chance to do sth （做某事的機(jī)會(huì)），lookafter （照顧），preparebreakfast for sb （為某人準(zhǔn)備早飯），makes sb guilty（讓某人有負(fù)罪感）．

解答 This passageis mainly about the customs of a western traditional festival，ThanksgivingDay，which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by duringthe festival．【高分句型】（概括）
Afterreading the passage，I had a better understanding of Thanksgiving Day．In myopinion，since the festival has a lovely and healthy theme，why not do as theAmericans do？Don't you think giving thanks to things and people around us isvery necessary？We can't deny it is a good chance to spread kindness andconsideration．（中國(guó)人過(guò)感恩節(jié)的重要性和原因）
Take myselffor example．Because I am busy in studying on weekdays，I have little time tolook after my parents，which makes me guilty．【高分句型】In order to reward them and make them relaxed on the weekend，I get up early in the morning and prepare breakfast for them willingly，whichmakes them delighted．【高分句型】（舉例闡述重視感恩的重要性）
So it isvital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good andany person that is nice．（自己的觀點(diǎn)-結(jié)論）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作是將閱讀與寫(xiě)作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說(shuō)明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．